Post by jo70mo on Nov 12, 2011 12:08:54 GMT 1
This document is to help people who do not want to do an involved response but would like to submit a statement outlining their main issues with the document.
We have written about 8 different points and people can use as many or as few as they want to create their own simple response. Obviously people may have other points they wish to add or even disgree with our points. That is fine. If people felt able to rewrite stuff in their own words/style, that would be great.
If you have friends/ relatives who would like to support by making a simple response but don't understand all the ins and outs - maybe they could submit a simple response with just a couple of points such as it being hard to comment when supporting docs not available and the document should be rewritten with proper collaboration. That is just an example of how the different points could be combined.
If people would like the rationale behind any of the points explaining, please feel free to ask questions and we'll do our best to respond.
If you cannot open the attachments you can view a pdf of the document here:
lancashire-he.dsa-lancashire.org.uk/docs/SimpleResponse.pdf
Jo
We have written about 8 different points and people can use as many or as few as they want to create their own simple response. Obviously people may have other points they wish to add or even disgree with our points. That is fine. If people felt able to rewrite stuff in their own words/style, that would be great.
If you have friends/ relatives who would like to support by making a simple response but don't understand all the ins and outs - maybe they could submit a simple response with just a couple of points such as it being hard to comment when supporting docs not available and the document should be rewritten with proper collaboration. That is just an example of how the different points could be combined.
If people would like the rationale behind any of the points explaining, please feel free to ask questions and we'll do our best to respond.
If you cannot open the attachments you can view a pdf of the document here:
lancashire-he.dsa-lancashire.org.uk/docs/SimpleResponse.pdf
Jo
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